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dialogue_500; [Gokusen] Drunken Confessions
This one was written for a
dialogue_500 challenge. I've always wanted to try writing ShinKumi (and ooh, I also have them claimed over at
1sentence, ack!) and when the "Drunken Confessions" prompt came up, I figured it was my chance. :p There's a version which has (almost) pure dialogue, which can be found here. This one has more words because it has more description. I don't think I do very well with pure dialogue. *sigh*
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Author:
aoimidori
Fandom: Gokusen (mangaverse, mostly)
Prompt: 02 – Drunken Confessions
Pairings/Characters: Sawada Shin x Yamaguchi Kumiko, Tetsu, Minoru
Rating: PG-13 (to be safe, because it involves drunkenness?)
Warnings: Drunken Shin = OOC Shin, Plus this is SO UNBETA'd (I didn't even check it myself. T_T)
Word Count: 533 (accdg to Open Office anyway, but I think it counted all the hiccups too)
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Author:
Fandom: Gokusen (mangaverse, mostly)
Prompt: 02 – Drunken Confessions
Pairings/Characters: Sawada Shin x Yamaguchi Kumiko, Tetsu, Minoru
Rating: PG-13 (to be safe, because it involves drunkenness?)
Warnings: Drunken Shin = OOC Shin, Plus this is SO UNBETA'd (I didn't even check it myself. T_T)
Word Count: 533 (accdg to Open Office anyway, but I think it counted all the hiccups too)
One would think that Sawada Shin would manage to keep his cool all the time. But apparently, even Shin isn't immune to the powers of alcohol.
“Aaah.. ahh, enough,” he said, red in the face, “Stop touch (hic) ing me there.”
“Eeeeeeeh?! What is Sawada doing here?!” Yamaguchi Kumiko exclaimed, surprised to see her top student sprawled on the floor of her living room.
“Aheee.. stoooo (hic) oop it. Not theeeeeere (hic),” she was about to call Tetsu and Minoru and ask for help in transferring Shin to the guest room but his silly face caught her attention.
“Oi, Sawada,” she tapped his cheeks, “Oi, wake up! What are you doing in my house?!”
“Hehehe,” he giggled, “(hic) Stop touching me theeeeeeere.”
“What are you talking about?! No one's touching you anywhere!”
“Ehehehe (hic) hehe, I can't take this any (hic) more,” he moved his right hand towards his crotch, “Stoooop iiiiiit.”
“Sawada!” Yankumi, pink in the face, slapped his hands. “Stop! Who brought you here?! Why are you so drunk?!”
“Yankumi-chaaaaaa (hic) n, is that you? You're so purrrrtyyyy without (hic) the ugly pigtails,” he said, touching her hair.
“Sawada Shin! If you don't stop acting like this...!”
“Pretty pretty Yankumi-chaaaaaaa (hic) n.”
Patience thinning, Yankumi could feel a vein popping on her forehead, “Tetsu! Minoru! Kyo!”
“Ne, Yankumi,” his voice was suddenly low, like a whisper.
“Eh?!”
“(hic) Ba-ka,” his finger was on her cheek, “Ahahahahaha,” he suddenly burst out laughing.
She could feel her cheeks getting flushed.
“Stand up! Come one, Sawada, stand up! There. Lean on me, I'll take you to the guest room myself. Agh. Tetsu! Minoru! Kyo!”
She placed his arm around her shoulder, trying to support him.
“Ahhh, Yankumi, you're so (hic) soft,” Shin said, rubbing his cheek on her shoulder. “You smell so good too.”
“You shut up Sawada,” Yankumi hissed, pissed off and determined to get to the bottom of this.
He giggled again, “You're so pretty when you get worked up.”
“Shut up.”
“Oi Yankumi. Look at me.”
“...”
“I like you,” he whispered, and then planted a kiss right on her lips. She stood staring at him for a few seconds.
“Ahahahahahahahahahaha,” and then he broke into a huge laughter. Yankumi let go of his arm and let him sprawl on the floor laughing out loud.
“TETSU!! MINORU!! KYO!! COME HERE NOW!!!”
“Ojou!” Tetsu and Minoru finally appeared, looking frantic.
“WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG?!”
“Ahhh, well,” Tetsu started, trying to cough up some explanation.
“WHY IS SAWADA HERE?! AND WHY IS HE THIS DRUNK?! WHO'S RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS?!”
“I-i-it's K-k-kyo,” Tetsu stuttered, “He came home with the boy, already drunk.”
“WHAT?! Don't tell me he took Sawada out to clubs?! My student is still underaged!”
“...”
“Ah, take him to the guest room!”
“Hai! Right away, ojou!”
“KYO!!!!! Where is Kyo?! Just he wait til I get my hands on him!” She stormed out the room, leaving Tetsu and Minoru to handle the very much drunk Shin.
“I dreamt (hic) of her,” he whispered with a silly grin as they took him to the guest room, “I dreamt that I finally (hic) told her.”Author's Note: I suck. I wasn't so happy with the ending actually. But anyway, like I said, I've wanted to try out writing ShinKumi for a while now so when this dialogue challenge came up, I couldn't help myself. There was a chapter in the manga where Shin goes out with Kyo and they get drunk and got to clubs and stuff. And Shin does say the words “ahhhh stop touching me there” with a silly look, and this was supposed to center on the part where Yankumi finds him at her house. But my Gokusen scanlations are with a friend and I couldn't check if I had it right. So this is basically just based on that, but twisted to my own version. PLUS I imagined the Jdrama versions of them when I wrote it. Except Kyo exists. So, uh, just imagine Nakama Yukie and MatsuJun transported to Mangaverse!Gokusen. :p
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